These are my preliminary sketches for my poster. My band is, “Empire of the Sun,” and the name of their album is, “Walking on a dream.” Feedback please.
For this exercise, I chose the word “pain.” Dilek suggested that worked on a background for the design. My original design only consisted of the word pain with some spikes coming out of the word, so I decided to add two shadows behind that could work as a background. I think this change adds a lot more to the simple design since it makes it busier, and almost gives it the effect of shaking, and it also emphasizes the word pain. it also makes it more subtle to the eye since the contrast from white to black is not as dramatic as in the first design. If anyone has any more feedback to improve my design, I’d be more than glad to implement your ideas. Thanks to the people that have already given me some feedback.
This is a DVD cover I designed for my slide-show. It includes the synopsis.
“Submerge yourself in an incredible journey as you experience light, line, shape, and color, like never before. Admire a series of beautiful long-exposure photographs combined together to create a breath-taking light-show to the song, ‘August’s Rhapsody,’ by Mark Mancina”.